tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1894992689217300894.post850196485281850180..comments2024-03-28T13:14:15.205-04:00Comments on Ann Michelle's World: New Story: The Femford School (Part Two)Ann Michellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11486529597586467120noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1894992689217300894.post-15571149670007885512018-01-25T08:09:27.746-05:002018-01-25T08:09:27.746-05:00Along with 'whyguys', I was very intereste...Along with 'whyguys', I was very interested in this until I saw a review which mentioned the forced-bi and cuckolding ending (a huge turn-on for many, I know, but a huge turn-off for me). Why so many writers in this genre persist in describing women as 'superior' and then go on to portray them as sex-obsessed, amoral, disloyal and thoroughly loathsome creatures escapes me. I'm hugely disappointed that this clearly able writer opted not to break the mould here. Still, at least I saved my money.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1894992689217300894.post-89711906404072685272017-08-02T09:37:02.799-04:002017-08-02T09:37:02.799-04:00
Was TRULY interested in this as my favorite venue...<br />Was TRULY interested in this as my favorite venue is that of implied future Female Supremacist Gynarchy, but someone told me of the male-male ending and that ended any further inquiry. Yes, fine for others, but was glad I was informed...<br /><br />STILL... BRAVO on so very much of what You have done for such fiction!whyguysnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1894992689217300894.post-2186499274927698152017-06-20T22:19:04.759-04:002017-06-20T22:19:04.759-04:00Thanks K! I'm glad you like it! I really enj...Thanks K! I'm glad you like it! I really enjoyed the setting on this one and the challenge of managing so many characters. It was definitely fun to write!<br /><br />The endings are always a little hard to judge. You never know how much wrap up is needed or at what point it will start to drag. I'll try to add a bit next time. :)<br />AnnMichellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08180324622829776755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1894992689217300894.post-53136072230921915562017-06-20T18:46:55.464-04:002017-06-20T18:46:55.464-04:00Really enjoyed it!
Not as much as the first part, ...Really enjoyed it!<br />Not as much as the first part, but I think this has been the case for me and all your two-parters so far :p I think that the endings of your first parts are always fantastic cliffhangers, but the endings of the last parts are always a bit "out of nowhere", as if it skipped a chapter.<br />But again, really enjoyed it, different setting from usual, great character development and descriptions, some humor, and really well written as always! Looking forward to the next one :)Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05237844434395459930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1894992689217300894.post-1668021475649512592017-06-19T11:14:38.797-04:002017-06-19T11:14:38.797-04:00Thank you, Daniel! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)...Thank you, Daniel! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)<br /><br />On the different subplots, I understand. It's always hard to decide what to include and what not to include as my audience is really varied and likes different things. I try to accommodate everyone over time.<br /><br />Interesting idea about writing a "future" book. I have an idea for that actually.AnnMichellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08180324622829776755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1894992689217300894.post-77286673670456752282017-06-19T00:16:16.828-04:002017-06-19T00:16:16.828-04:00Great work again!!
Although I find myself don'...Great work again!!<br />Although I find myself don't really into cuckold and "gay" sex plots, but the power exchange and male humiliation parts are the BEST I ever read!!<br />I also think Femford School could use orgasm denial skills, forced "men" to submit (since they already locked up!), and through holding the keys, young girl students can learn domination and how to humiliating men.<br />So this stories keep me fantasizing about a femdom world/future where women use chastity cages to control ALL males, men and boys must become most submissive sissies to earn the chance of <br />humiliating orgasm!<br />Though we don't live in that wonderful world, but if you someday write a book about it, that would be similarly dreams come ture!danielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16320312241487746063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1894992689217300894.post-56582132389930902062017-06-11T13:33:02.578-04:002017-06-11T13:33:02.578-04:00By the way, two updates....
1. I haven't st...By the way, two updates....<br /><br /><br />1. I haven't stopped doing paperbacks. Amazon changed their system and it caused a hiccup for me. I'm sorting that out and will catch up soon.<br /><br />2. I'm zeroing in on how to get you books that don't look like my books. I may just sell them to you directly by email and use Paypal to handle payment. That would be nicely anonymous. It's easy to use too. I just need to put together the guidance on how to do it so you would know how to load them on your devices.AnnMichellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08180324622829776755noreply@blogger.com